Chaotic Romance

Hey! Well, this is the first chapter of a novel length story that I've been writing for the past year. As of now, I have about 27 out of 35 ...

This was a pretty good start, I like it for the most part. I do think that the dialogue seemed kind of forced as well as unrealistic... I really don't ...

This was interesting... really kind of creepy... I liked the fact that you used only dialogue, though once the second male came in, it was hard to tell who was ...

Thanks everyone! I love to read almost anything, but when it comes to writing, I usually stick to romance and supernatural. Usually both are in the same story...

Hey there! I just sort of found this site, and it looked interesting enough, so I joined! I've been writing since I was 14 and I absolutely LOVE it. I've ...